Saturday, January 19, 2008

*Butterfly Kiss...

As we went together, yet another time
On a butterfly bus, towards fire,
To visit the mirage of a dusty library
And the enigma of a temple beyond gods,
Beaming at our wings invisible, I
Turned towards you, to tell you nothing,
Because the voice around would'nt
Let you hear me, and the conversation
Somehow continued in a butterfly kiss...


*A butterfly kiss is when you flutter your eyelashes on the other person's cheek:)

6 comments:

vrinda said...

chinu...loved all 3 of ur posts...but gs the first poem is my fav..and buterfly kisses...wow!!

ARUN said...

when words touch, they do so via the cumulated memory in our senses: of course, it couldnt be otherwise, for touch is such an intimate feeling and words would fail to touch if something that really 'touch' doesnt carry them. the eyelashes, in a hasty hush, get together and part and brush a dear cheek - it could be nothing less than a poem. and this is such a fond poem :)

ranjith said...

In simple words - I loved it Chinnamma! Something I really liked. Just a suggestion - not sure if you really require the defenition of a butterfly kiss down there. kind of screens the beauty!

PIN said...

Very nice poem..
and the kiss too..

ലതി said...

Nice poem. Best wishes.

Nona said...

Good for people to know.